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Sound of the Peephole, Pt. 2 by ~Fuzzyfishdorito:iconFuzzyfishdorito:



That’s not an alarm.
That’s a phone.
I should be there.
Now.

Violent butterflies
Only thrash harder
When I’m here
And they aren’t.

Finally!
One mass pickup.
We hope Dolly
Won’t take out the mirrors.

He’s faking faking suicide
Grip love for the contraption
I don’t feel this looks real
But I only care how it sounds

I finish reading
Begin writing
He’s editing
We’re too creative for this job

Meatballs
Naptime
Don’t touch the noose
He’ll use it on her later

My ears are clogged
With noise
And he decides which ones
It will never be soft enough

At last!
Wrapped and in a box
If he has the same shirt on
They had too much fun

I go all that way
In the dark
All alone
Just to eat

I must be desperate
Or stupid
Or both
But I laugh in the face of danger

But now it’s time for bed
Because I’m going back tomorrow
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The title in full is "The Sound of the Peephole, Part 2" but it wouldn't all fit.

Another poem for class. The prompt here was to write a poem about "Saturday." She left that really open to interpretation, so I just decided to write a poem about last Saturday, when I was on set as sound mixer for "The Peephole." And yes, it was on purpose that I decided to talk about things without saying what they are directly. I don't like saying things straight out in my poetry.

This one will almost certainly be edited, and I will update when that happens, but I wanted to put up what I have now.

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