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Humanmoment Fusion by ~Fuzzyfishdorito:iconFuzzyfishdorito:



Nothing exists.
But.
This.
Moment.

My heart wants to
Spin
Skip
Leap
Dance
Out of my body
So do I
So do we
So we do

Who needs drugs
When I’m already high
Flying on giggles
Baking ice into intimacy
Three angels, one love

Arms thrown wide
My body is a bull’s eye
I tan in sound
Music soaks through my skin
And assimilates to my bones

Reality is unreal
In humanmoment fusion

Sundancing
Moonlighting
We fall into place
Three flavors of epic glee
One organism

Embarrassed to be caught staring
Lovingly at perfection
I close my eyes
Turn my cheeks warmthwards
I inhale the light of their presence

My red-taped box
Obliterated
I unplug
Wake up
Lock up
Join up
Tune up
Get out
And explode.

I.
Want.
Nothing.
But for this moment
To last
Forever
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I really can't tell if this is the right category. I think so, but if someone can find a better one, please tell me.

Anyways, wrote this for my creative writing class. I just finished it, now, so I don't know if it will go through any more changes before its final product, but I'm really happy with it now, so I'm putting it up as it is.

The prompt for this one was to write a poem about something we crave or miss. This one is...both?

Basically, the idea I had was I wanted to write about a moment in which I was completely content and wanted nothing but to just be in the moment. Then I thought of three times when this happened in the past couple years, borrowed imagery from them, and then tried to abstract them out into a universal moment that wasn't necessarily any moment at all, but was still referencing those past three moments.

There are also loose references to a couple other things in here: my family's study, the film Kairo (Pulse), and the Eddie Izzard rendition of "For the Benefit of Mr. Kite." Those are all in the same stanza, if you can find them.

I may throw in another reference if I can find the right place for it, but for right now, it's not there, so don't worry about it.

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